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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Empress Files: The Ghetto Gremlin(updated 7/30)

    You're right, damn, it is suppose to be 42. Well, thats what I get for writing at work :D until Dono gets back on the wagon, I plann on continuting ...

    Jul 27, 2006
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: YWS 3.O

    I'm quite amused. and glad this place is back... now I have something to do while i'm screwing around at work.

    Jul 26, 2006
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Slaughter-House Five Literary Essay

    I love this book! In my english class my group did an hour long presentation, it was freekin great! We had a song for the Tralfamadorians, it was to the ...

    May 12, 2006
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Empress: The Triad (New Material 7/28/06)

    Remember the native-american indians in war paint and what not... not for this story... but still, remember. :) see good things come from boring movies.

    May 10, 2006
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Confrontation

    love the hook... I was like a fish. very nice. Your use of despair seemed a bit redundant. Only because you used the same word over and over. But not ...

    May 10, 2006
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Empress: The Triad (New Material 7/28/06)

    Are you gonna include any part that I "wrote" ... I'm not a writer... feel free to say no. I can be a muse or something that sounds cooler than ...

    May 4, 2006
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Empress: The Triad (New Material 7/28/06)

    “She’s gonna blow!” I think you could have thought of something more creative... well I just don't like it because it takes me along this thought process: blow ---> bloated ...

    May 4, 2006
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Empress: The Triad (New Material 7/28/06)

    I love it! Is this just random or is it some sort of silly intro into the haloween one?

    May 3, 2006
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sixteen Years Gone By

    A feeling I know too well... It reads well. Seems like there should be more punctuation. But poetry is such a general idea, so take it or leave it.

    Feb 6, 2006
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sweat strings

    Totally reminds me of the beet-nick scene... black tights and tiny glasses...

    Jan 30, 2006
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: the Horde

    Good start. Totally continue. And as for the gramer stuff, not a huge deal. Try proofing it before you post. But I'm sure creativity is much more important.

    Jan 30, 2006
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: the ice is melting

    I like it. has a very slothish feel to it.

    Jan 30, 2006
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hell

    Ooo I like it. The [quote]about my hamster , and the milk man [quote] part kinda threw me off. I was thinking sad thoughts, then a hamster came into the ...

    Jan 30, 2006
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: sunshine ( PLEASE read and comment )

    awesome. I'm not a fan of the chorus though... but depending ont he music it may work. But over all, I like it a lot. Good job.

    Jan 30, 2006
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Who, What, When, Where, Why?

    Sad. Moving. Loving. I like it. But I think the question thing is just too new to me... it just comes off as awkward. But I do believe it is ...

    Jan 27, 2006


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